Friday, July 23, 2010

Of yellow river n Flamingos.... !


You sit back on that big, brown couch
You talk 'bout love n life
Of wet woods n sunrise.
You fake, sulk and smile high.
You dream of yellow river n flamingos
And hold me back like never before
You do this and do that

And all that to let me go!

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

Uff, one of the best poems i have ever read... crisp and precise... could feel the piercing words..

shut up n write! said...

hey much thanks

PsycheBubbles said...

You sit back, and write well.

The yellow of the river and the colours of the flamingo painted it beautifully! :)

Wild Strawberry! said...

:)..err thanks

John Doe said...

beautiful