Friday, July 23, 2010

Of yellow river n Flamingos.... !


You sit back on that big, brown couch
You talk 'bout love n life
Of wet woods n sunrise.
You fake, sulk and smile high.
You dream of yellow river n flamingos
And hold me back like never before
You do this and do that

And all that to let me go!

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

Uff, one of the best poems i have ever read... crisp and precise... could feel the piercing words..

Wild Strawberry said...

hey much thanks

psychebubbles said...

You sit back, and write well.

The yellow of the river and the colours of the flamingo painted it beautifully! :)

Wild Strawberry said...

:)..err thanks